Story draft

The streets seemed  loud the alleyways long and thin and the sky was pitch black I was walking back home after having a fight with a boy from school he was what i would call despicable. He would always pick on the silent ones and humiliate them in class. On a regular day I would avoid getting angry at hos stupid  childish insults but today had not been a regular day, As he walked past me he spanked me round the back of the head the whole class started to giggle and laugh. My blood boiled i wanted to cry but couldn’t i got up from my desk and shoved him, the boy surprised turns around, The anger had spread all over my body like a desiese and in that instance i swang my fist towards his face. My knuckles collided with his face causing him to stumble and fall on to the floor. Twenty minutes later i found myself in the headmasters office talking on the phone with my mum she sounded depressed and disappointed and me getting in trouble was not making her better when the phone call ended the boy from earlier on came inside the headmasters office clutching his nose and glaring at me as I stood there.  I had won the battle and now i had finally gained the respect i had always wished for.

I left the school at about 7 in the evening and the skies were already pitch black, one by one the street lights started flickering on  and the whole street was lit up.  It was a long way from home and busses past every hour so i  decided to walk home. I turned through dark alleyways and streets but i saw no sign of anyone in the streets it seemed like mankind had been wiped  from the universe and i was the only one to have  survived.

 

Who might you want to lead you Jack or Ralph

I would want ralph to lead me becuase ralph has good way of convincing people without having to be rude and insulting as jack is.  Also ralph isnt as violent as jack and puts across some realy good leadership skills. I think that jack as the leader would be pointless becuase he wants to be leader just becuase he thinks he is the best at commanding people but thats what a good leader is obout.

why can napoleon maintain his power on animal farm ?

Power is kept by napoleon because of many reasons. The most important reason is because of the dogs that napoleon owns these dogs are terrible scary and very dangerous to be around. In chapter 5 the dog’s committed a horrendous murder killing the chickens and some sheep. When they had finished their confession, the dogs promptly tore their throats out, and in a terrible voice Napoleon demanded whether any other animal had anything to confess”. Supposedly in the commandments it says that no animal shall kill any other animal,

Just when the dogs killed the chicken’s napoleon changed the commandment to say that no animal shall kill another animal without cause.

 

Napoleon for such a short animal is massive he is very strong pig and definitely stronger than snowball who is small compared to napoleon. In the picture it shows that napoleon is very big and so we all know that when it comes to fighting size matters a lot. snowball may have a chance also because when the animals were fighting Mr jones snowball was the one that bit Mr jones on the leg but squealer lied an changed the story and said that napoleon was the one that bit Mr jones on the leg. If napoleon wasn’t a cowered then snowball would have no chance against him.

The other reason for why napoleon can maintain power on animal farm because he has loads of followers. The one that can speak and say very passionate speeches is squealer an every time that he talk the animals are very convinced of what he says and this is why napoleon has. One of the examples of this is when squealer said that napoleon had bitten mr jone on the leg wich was a lie the animals were very grateful and they believed squealer.

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